Wednesday 26 August 2015

The writing process - should you know where you're going?

This is something I've often wondered.  I've never, ever sat down and written a book with a set of predetermined events in mind, and I wonder if knowing where my story was going would improve, or stunt, the writing process.

Here's how I tackle writing a novel.

1. I have an idea - usually it's a scene.  The scene will have a character, a place, a feel and a purpose.  Sometimes I know at this point what the log-line of the book will be - in other words, I'll have a high-level 'what if' premise that I want to work with.  Other times, all I have is an image, like a mental GIF.  This usually turns out to be my opening scene.  Nine times out of ten, it'll remain that way.














2. I start writing the scene and as I write it, questions will arise that will lead to filling out more of the story.  For instance - why is my character where they are?  What are they doing?  Are they waiting for something or someone?  Why are they sad/happy/angry - are they in danger?  From whom?  This will lead from a short opening 'teaser' scene into Chapter 1 where I start to explain the story (to myself).

3. By the end of chapter one, I've usually found out what my character's (initial) motivation is and this will lead me to the first Event.  This is plot point 1.  Here we are, doing a thing, when another thing happens that starts bigger things happening.  Usually things that my character wasn't expecting, or that we as the reader (and I was the author) wasn't expecting.

4. The journey begins.  There's always a journey, in the same way that there's always a lighthouse, always a man and always a city.  If you're a fan of Bioshock, you'll know what I mean.
























The journey might be one from place to place, or it might be from one state to another (home planet to distant planet, bad, bad man to good man - or vice versa).



















5. During the first third of this journey, I get to know my character(s).  They might start to build something, or do something.  Then plot point 2 hits.

6. Plot Point 2 - where everything falls apart.  Just when we thought we were getting somewhere, someone throws a giant spanner and manages to hit The Works first time.  Now my characters find themselves in conflict.  Often, this is where the 'real' adversary turns up, or if they've already met the Big Bad of their universe, it starts to ramp up a notch, perhaps revealing some motivation and purpose and unravelling answers to some questions we may or may not have asked.

Still, there's no planning.  What the Big Bad is, is often driven by the characters and their development - what they want, what's important to them, what they fear most.  When this happens is determined by whatever came before.

7. Plot Point 3, heading towards The Finale.  This is where more questions are answered, my characters' characters are tested, and hijinks begin to ensure.  Followed by...

8. The Finale.  Where everything comes together, anything left to reveal is revealed, characters fight or flee for their lives and the battle is won... or lost.  Its up to the characters.  I won't force them to win, although I always hope they will.

9. The wrap-up.  Everyone laughs, jumps in the air and there's a freeze-frame.
















10.  There's a 10, because I like even numbers.  So, just as there's often a prologue, or as I often think of it when I'm writing it, a teaser (in the same way you get the before-credits teaser on a TV show), there's often an epilogue - just a little hint of where the character or characters are off to next.  Most of my novels aren't stand-alone, so these epilogues lead into the next book.

As I've mentioned in previous blog posts, it's a messy process, but I find that when writing consistently, daily, plot holes are less likely to appear than writing over the mammoth period of time that Just Drink took (fifteen years from first draft completion to final draft completion, with a fourteen-year break in between).

Once the first draft has gone through the stages above, it's time for Editing... which I'll talk about in my next blog post.



Wednesday 12 August 2015

I write... SATCH?

Supernatural Action Thriller Comedy Horror.  That's a LOT to try and pack into one book, and one genre.  But what if the standard genres just don't describe your work and SATCH just... does?

When you list your book on Amazon or Kobo, you pick the closest genre that fits your book; but then you and four thousand other novels are all sitting in the same Olympic-sized kiddie pool, packed in like sardines.  Sardines in a chlorinated pool.  I don't need to tell you how wrong that is.

There's a school of thought that if your book doesn't fit snugly into a genre or two, you haven't written to your audience.  And I agree with that... I do.  But... if you've ever gone online to look up your favourite genre, you'll find you're spoiled for choice - as long as you don't read the kind of books I write.  The astounding number of creative works out there under any one genre heading is... well, astounding.

So how can readers find the specific type of work they really love?  More than that, how can we tell original stories if we blinker ourselves to fit a genre heading?  How can we bring something new to the table when we write?  We know what we love, our audience knows what they love... and humbly, as a writer, I of all people realise, I'm not currently setting any new trends with my 'science-vampires pursued by evil scientists' storyline.  But if I were looking for a thriller, I'd be thinking crime.  If I were looking at action, I'd think guns and dudes in tank tops and red headbands who don't say much.  Vampires - well.  Don't even.  Science fiction is for world-builders whose vision extends beyond our own universe, and I'm not currently a world-builder, (although I do have a novel in the works that will be sci-fi, but that's not for here).

So I ask the question - are there really enough genres allocated by the big book sellers to allow authors to find their audience?  I would argue 'no'.  You don't have to be terribly original to find your work is simply not represented by the genres available.  Or the number you can select.

What do you think?


Sunday 9 August 2015

Find me on Wattpad

Hi all,

If you're looking for a free sample of some of my work, you can find me on Wattpad.  Find the first five chapters of 'Just Drink', the first few chapters of my second book, 'First Blood' (working title), which will be released around Christmas, and some of my older work, dusted off and published for fun.

What is Wattpad?  Wattpad is a writing community where all the work published is free, and writers of all ages and abilities can publish their work and get feedback from other writers and their potential audience.

Friday 7 August 2015

Interview with Jim Vines on Jim Vine Presents


Recently I was interviewed by Jim Vines Presents, a blog for indie authors.  Read the full interview here.